7/10READERReport 2005-09-12 14:58:28to comment writer “Archaic”: You’re a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story “authors.” Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one “M.” and “primitive” doesn’t contain an “A.”
The story wasn’t bad at all, I thought. Milf sex Who gives a shit about sentence structure? Your dialogue was very primative, your descriptions were juvenile, it just was not very entertaining. read some Hemmingway and try again.«1» This story is sexy and that’s what matters to me! A Hot Stud seeking aFillie in Heat..READERReport 2005-09-14 13:46:13Not bad at all. . …made me cum! 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-03 08:35:31Hey, I really loved you short, Sweet, and sexeriffic story..I ssure wish you would tell us some more of you getting your wet, Hot Pussy filled, first with his big dick and then with his cum.. A Hot Stud seeking aFillie in Heat..READERReport 2005-09-14 13:46:13Not bad at all. . …made me cum! 7/10.READERReport 2005-09-12 11:58:31You pretty much hit every one of my pet peeves with this story. 7/10.READERReport 2005-09-12 11:58:31You pretty much hit every one of my pet peeves with this story.
