The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK. Milf sex People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. The spelling and grammar are an insult to my intelligence. Maybe a wee bit too short and it needs a little more detail.«1» Maybe a wee bit too short and it needs a little more detail.«1» This story did nothing for me. Who enjoys watching grainy quality pornos ? Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. So why should we be subjected to stories that are so poorly constructed? 3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs.
