keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. Milf porn … I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-04-07 21:18:59crap but i fink u could probs improve soon. way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling. I’m sure this is the way you talk but that is too bad. Maybe you will improve in a few years. Fix ’em.READERReport 2007-04-06 23:39:57DUDE MORE PRACTICE I GIVE IT A 3/10 MAKE EM LONGER MORE DETAILEZREADERReport 2007-04-06 14:54:25You need an English class real bad.
