The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. Milf sex Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Limit the use of adverbs as well. Instead I she give you my honest thoughts. Dump those damned exclamation marks! Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Expand your skills and keep writing.DragonheartReport 2008-10-01 18:31:44″The cloudless sun beat down unmerciful on the somber gathered contingency”
“fresh dug plot”
“No no, he had no intention..”
“plowed her slit with gusto”
“strawberry tipped tits? You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst.
