From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. Let’s Start with the intro, so Ken is two years younger than Mendy who is 20, therefore Ken is 18 but still lives at home and Mendy helps him at times? Milf sex J.A.G«1» Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style. It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just
