There was no build up. Milf sex And just way too… Try harder.«1234» 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-21 04:05:06The story is good, although you need to proof read your work. Try harder.«1234» Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. Try harder.«1234» It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-24 13:11:15Good story! Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. And just way too… Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story.
