3 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 02:50:15you write well, but you have issues with word usage, there are places you need to edit, there are words that need to be changed, but the story is well written as far as plot, character development and conflict, I am really enjoying your stories and I hope to read more soonReport 2010-07-10 15:54:11keep writing these, their greatReport 2010-06-22 07:33:55good series, keep it up«1» 3 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 02:50:15you write well, but you have issues with word usage, there are places you need to edit, there are words that need to be changed, but the story is well written as far as plot, character development and conflict, I am really enjoying
